So this is my first video for JRN 423. I'm not too happy with it. I think I'm gonna end up re-doing this one to make it better. Let me know what you think could make it better!! I have some ideas, but I want to know your opinons!
"Man's Best Friend" Redefined from Aliscia Leo on Vimeo.
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3 years ago
Cool. Needs her walking across street with dog though.
ReplyDeletei liked this a lot, and agree with Chris-- just needs some shots of her about and about. nice story and moments :)
ReplyDeleteI like the subject, I learned a lot from this. I agree with Becky you need to have her walking with the dog. I know you said you were going to try so the idea was there. I think you really showed how much she really loves her dog.
ReplyDeleteI like the intimacy. I think the lighting is lacking. I would also really like to see her in class with the dog. I would like to see her when strangers come up to pet the dog. I want to see all of the things she is talking about.
ReplyDeleteI would really like to see a couple of still images in here to set apart the video. Don't be afraid to include still imagery. It's multimedia. Don't be afraid to use multiple outlets.